Contemplative Inquiry

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Tag: Poetry

CONTEMPLATING THE BIRTH OF HAIKU IN ENGLISH

The American born poet Ezra Pound (1885-1972) is credited with the first English language haiku, written in 1913 (1,2). He described it at the time (1) as a ‘hokku-like sentence’ and used two lines rather than three. A title provides some of the context, which differs from Japanese practice.

IN A STATION OF THE METRO

The apparition of these faces in the crowd:

petals on a wet, black bough.

Pound was born in Idaho, USA, but lived for most of his life in England, France and Italy. He was part of a generation eager to learn from China and Japan. Poets and artists alike were seeking inspiration outside their received inheritance of European derived culture. They wanted to shake it up.

Pound became a key figure in the modernist poetry of his age. In the years leading up and into World War 1, he was involved in the brief yet influential Imagist movement (3) whose three key principles were:

1  direct treatment of things, whether subjective or objective.

2 use no word that does not contribute to the presentation

3 regarding rhythm: to compose in sequence of a musical phrase, not in the sequence of a metronome.

It is easy to see how a Japanese Zen form could be a welcome influence, especially concerning the first two principles. But the point was not simply to copy the Japanese form. That would not be possible, and would not support the clarity and authenticity sought after. The languages are different. The Anglophone  poets would not be judged in part on the quality and presence of their calligraphy. The form would need to find a new home in a new language.

My personal attraction to haiku is its brevity and its focus on being in place.  Place is paramount. Time is usually abbreviated to an extended moment allowing for a  minimal narrative. In Pound’s metro station piece, the ‘apparition of faces’ is not fixed. It’s in motion, though very briefly, enough to be perceived by the poet/observer. Then there’s an attention switch to the petals and the bough – but the duration of the switch is likewise minimal. Narrative is confined to an extended moment of living experience.

Within such moments, I find a withdrawal and emptying out of personality and a sensitivity to interbeing (4), where the distinction between observer and observed disappears. They are not exactly one, but they are not separate either.

Hence for me, reading and writing haiku can be a contemplative practice and part of my inquiry. There are of course other ways of using this flexible form, but they all demand a momentary heightening  of focus and attention. 

William Carlos Williams (1883-1962) was an American poet of the same generation as Ezra Pound. One of his best known poems is a disguised haiku, arranged differently than is now conventional. I don’t know exactly what he meant by the opening phrase ‘so much depends upon’, but I like to think of as an invitation to open our doors of perception a little wider.

So much depends

upon

a red wheel

barrow

glazed with rain

water

beside the white

chickens

The unvarnished haiku would be:

A red wheel barrow

glazed with rain water

beside the white chickens

(1) Haiku in English: The First Hundred Years chief editor Jim Kacian, editors Phillip Rowland & Alan Burns. New York & London: W. W Norton & Company, 2013 (Introduction by Billy Collins)

(2) William J. Higginson & Penny Harter The Haiku Handbook: How to Write, Teach, and Appreciate Haiku. Tokyo, New York, London: Kodansha International, 2009 (25th anniversary edition, forward by Jane Reihhold)

(3) https://contemplativeinquiry.blog/2017/08/07/poem-au-vieux-jardin/

(4) https://contemplativeinquiry.blog/2017/06/20/embracing-interbeing/

TWILIGHT AT TW0 PM

old wall, old tree – both in shade

clouds constrain the sun

and there’s stillness in the land

WINTER AFFIRMATION

cold and bright an azure sky

frames the slender masts

affirming light in winter.

BEYOND THE EQUINOX

these dark mobile clouds

racing through the autumn sky

as the soft light fades

Picture taken, 6.55 pm, 27 September, sunset in Gloucester, England.

A NEW DAY

the pink clouds of this dawn

illuminate a waiting day:

welcome rain may fall.

PHILIP CARR-GOMM AND FRANK MCEOWEN: A CONVERSATION

An Interview with Frank McEowen (1) is the latest offering in Philip Carr-Gomm’s This Magical Life podcast. The overall aim of This Magical Life is to explore the intersection of Druidry, Psychology and Wisdom. Philip is a clinical psychologist and led OBOD (the Order of Bards, Ovates and Druids) for some 30 years. Frank is the author of, among other works, The Mist-Filled Path: Celtic Wisdom for Exiles, Wanderers and Seekers.

This wide-ranging interview covers three main topics: Celtic bards, Chinese hermit poets and politics in America today. All of these are tied into Frank’s journey and service. He was born in Mississippi, USA, of Irish, Scottish, Welsh and English ancestry. At an early age he experienced mystical encounters with the other world. These later prompted him to work with indigenous elders in North America, and later with teachers in Britain and Ireland, especially Ireland, opening himself also to the spirit(s) of place. He speaks of his journey as a whole as one of ‘soul retrieval’. His early books – The Mist-Filled Path, Meditations on the Irish Sprit Wheel, and The Spiral of Memory and Belonging, come out of this experience.

For reasons explained in the interview, Frank then made a decision to ‘disappear inward’, becoming a hermit and poet. As well as working in Celtic spirituality, Frank was also a student of Zen. He had a natural attraction to Chinese and Japanese wayfaring hermit poetry and modelled the life style as well as the art, adjusted to a different time and culture. This period led to three books of poetry published under the name of Frank LaRue Owen: The School of Soft Attention, The Temple of Warm Harmony and Stirrup of the Sun and Moon.

Like Philip, part of Frank’s service is in the field of psychological healing and personal development, principally as a student of Arnold Mindell. Mindell coined the term ‘Dream Body’ – a psycho-spiritual approach that is also Earth reverencing. It is within this framework that they talk about American politics today. First they identify distressed energies within the national psyche which the current President has uncorked and used in a darkly charismatic and disinhibited way. The discussion takes off from there, looking at issues of grief, loss (of democracy) and possible  hope. Connecting this predicament to the bard/poet vocation, Frank quotes Ukrainian poet Ilya Kaminski: “the project of Empire is to dull the senses. The project of the poet is to wake up the senses”. Projects of Empire are not unique to the USA. There is something to reflect on for us all.

I recommend this podcast as a rich and varied conversation, covering a lot of ground in its 36 minutes.

(1) The YouTube post spells Frank’s surname as McEowen and the covers of his early books use MacEowen. I don’t know if he has altered the spelling over time.

BIRDS ON A BOARD

Birds together on a board

Sitting as silent companions

On their water margin retreat.

EVENING IMAGES 14 JUNE

Flowers and a painted wall

Direct us to the park:

People, space, and clouds.

HAIKU: 7.50PM 9 MAY 2025

beyond the May blue sky,

a waxing gibbous moon:

below, evening shadows spread.

A MAY’S EVE GIFT

Such casual abundance

In each passing moment:

A May’s Eve gift.

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