HARVEST MOON HAIKU

wild and broken light
defies the surrounding dark –
I thank the full moon

wild and broken light
defies the surrounding dark –
I thank the full moon
I have recently been investigating and tuning into prose poetry, getting to know the genre. Now I’m thinking about my own work.
As a start, I have reworked a poem I published in September 2024 (https://contemplativeinquiry.blog/2024/09/17/). I have found that the text asked for substantial alteration. It wasn’t just a matter of changing the arrangement of space. Despite the cousinship between the two, this is a different piece, written in a different way, at a different time.
“Looking out from limitation, I see a wide world, expectant.
“The beginning of sunset, a liminal moment in the wheel of the day. Facing east, I feel the sun behind me, still warm though on the brink of descent. Facing east, I see pale blue sky, pink clouds, wooded hills. I am held, fleetingly, by residues of sunlight on a majestic hornbeam whose leaves have begun to turn.
“Early evening, early autumn: a whole world in only seeming suspension between one state and another. The wheel continues to turn. Yet to hold a moment, in the moment, with clear awareness and softened heart makes that moment eternal.
“Looking out from limitation, I see a wide world, expectant.”

Still meditating on the way I want to write prose poetry, I notice that recent work tends to have a different feel to the earlier pieces I have read and connected with. This gives me an enhanced sense of a rich tradition to work in.
In The Valley Press Anthology of Prose Poetry, (2019), [1], I find longer pieces with more story telling, adjacent to flash fiction yet not the same. The poet’s state of awareness continues to take precedence over encounters and events.
Here is an extract from Anne Ryland’s Running, I become. She is in Northumberland, England, running towards the Scottish border.
“Running, redrafting myself, I return to my primal language of sigh and puff and laugh; I become sweat and tear, the low-thud song of my lungs. I become a woman wintering; I follow the pink-footed geese crossing the hard blue sky in a great wavering W, and when it sharpens to a V, a letter of purpose, I join the formation of those who know where to go and how and why, gliding upstream in their upwash, their wingbeat. Running, I become the border.”
[1] Anne Caldwell & Oz Hardwick (eds.) The Valley Press Anthology of Prose Poetry: Scarborough, 2019
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The American born poet Ezra Pound (1885-1972) is credited with the first English language haiku, written in 1913 (1,2). He described it at the time (1) as a ‘hokku-like sentence’ and used two lines rather than three. A title provides some of the context, which differs from Japanese practice.
IN A STATION OF THE METRO
The apparition of these faces in the crowd:
petals on a wet, black bough.
Pound was born in Idaho, USA, but lived for most of his life in England, France and Italy. He was part of a generation eager to learn from China and Japan. Poets and artists alike were seeking inspiration outside their received inheritance of European derived culture. They wanted to shake it up.
Pound became a key figure in the modernist poetry of his age. In the years leading up and into World War 1, he was involved in the brief yet influential Imagist movement (3) whose three key principles were:
1 direct treatment of things, whether subjective or objective.
2 use no word that does not contribute to the presentation
3 regarding rhythm: to compose in sequence of a musical phrase, not in the sequence of a metronome.
It is easy to see how a Japanese Zen form could be a welcome influence, especially concerning the first two principles. But the point was not simply to copy the Japanese form. That would not be possible, and would not support the clarity and authenticity sought after. The languages are different. The Anglophone poets would not be judged in part on the quality and presence of their calligraphy. The form would need to find a new home in a new language.
My personal attraction to haiku is its brevity and its focus on being in place. Place is paramount. Time is usually abbreviated to an extended moment allowing for a minimal narrative. In Pound’s metro station piece, the ‘apparition of faces’ is not fixed. It is in motion, though very briefly, enough to be perceived by the poet/observer. Then there’s an attention switch to the petals and the bough – but the duration of the switch is likewise minimal. Narrative is confined to an extended moment of living experience.
Within such moments, I find a withdrawal and emptying out of personality and a sensitivity to interbeing (4), where the distinction between observer and observed disappears. They are not exactly one, but they are not separate either.
Hence for me, reading and writing haiku can be a contemplative practice and part of my inquiry. There are of course other ways of using this flexible form, but they all demand a momentary heightening of focus and attention.
William Carlos Williams (1883-1962) was an American poet of the same generation as Ezra Pound. One of his best known poems is a disguised haiku, arranged differently than is now conventional. I don’t know exactly what he meant by the opening phrase ‘so much depends upon’, but I like to think of as an invitation to open our doors of perception a little wider.
So much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens
The unvarnished haiku would be:
A red wheel barrow
glazed with rain water
beside the white chickens
(1) Haiku in English: The First Hundred Years chief editor Jim Kacian, editors Phillip Rowland & Alan Burns. New York & London: W. W Norton & Company, 2013 (Introduction by Billy Collins)
(2) William J. Higginson & Penny Harter The Haiku Handbook: How to Write, Teach, and Appreciate Haiku. Tokyo, New York, London: Kodansha International, 2009 (25th anniversary edition, forward by Jane Reihhold)
(3) https://contemplativeinquiry.blog/2017/08/07/poem-au-vieux-jardin/
(4) https://contemplativeinquiry.blog/2017/06/20/embracing-interbeing/

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